commit 06fcc49f498930ef5a0722538d8ed3c2c7217125
parent 68b211816628378e3947f4c6b510fd1e7d8fe99c
Author: Anders Damsgaard <anders@adamsgaard.dk>
Date: Wed, 3 Jun 2020 09:56:17 +0200
Fix grammar
Diffstat:
2 files changed, 8 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-)
diff --git a/pages/005-energy-efficient-programming.html b/pages/005-energy-efficient-programming.html
@@ -67,11 +67,10 @@ href="https://ffmpeg.org/">ffmpeg(1)</a>:</p>
<p>The listeners would point a network audio client to this URL and
hear the speaker in real time. For the slides, the viewers connected
-via ssh(1) to a public guest account, automatically attach to a
-multiplexed terminal session controlled attach to a multiplexed
-terminal session controlled by the presenter, and watch the
-presentation in their own terminal. Questions were communicated
-via irc.</p>
+via ssh(1) to a public guest account, automatically attached to a
+multiplexed terminal session controlled by the presenter, and watched
+the presentation in their own terminal with minimal bandwith
+requirements. Questions were communicated via irc.</p>
<p>The source code for my presentation is available <a
href="https://src.adamsgaard.dk/brcon2020_adc/log.html">here</a>.
diff --git a/pages/005-energy-efficient-programming.txt b/pages/005-energy-efficient-programming.txt
@@ -47,10 +47,10 @@ would stream their mic to the icecast server, for example via
The listeners would point a network audio client to this URL and
hear the speaker in real time. For the slides, the viewers connected
-via ssh(1) to a public guest account, automatically attach to a
-multiplexed terminal session controlled by the presenter, and watch
-the presentation in their own terminal. Questions were communicated
-via irc.
+via ssh(1) to a public guest account, automatically attached to a
+multiplexed terminal session controlled by the presenter, and watched
+the presentation in their own terminal with minimal bandwith
+requirements. Questions were communicated via irc.
The source code for my presentation is available [11]here. The
[12]pointtools utility md2point(1) is useful for generating catpoint
